Once upon a time there was a little boy that was going to Canada for a trip with his sister and grandad.
30 minutes later…
They arrived at the airport to get the tickets and they got to the Private Jet…
They arrived and they were the only people on the Private Jet apart from the pilots, OF COURSE!
13 hours, 15 minutes and 47 seconds later...
They went down the stairs of the Private Jet and they saw the most beautiful native area in their whole life.
When they arrived at their hotel they were so amazed of there view and that they want to stay there for longer, so they discussed what to do in there town.
They wanted to go to the mall and get some food for them.
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Later on that week they were sitting at home just on there phone watching Mr. Beast on youtube and liked the videos, and subscribed.
Kia ora Kaydn!
ReplyDeleteI like how you were able to write a great story today in our blogging time. You showed resilience with the topic and were able to create a nice piece of writing. I like that your story took place in Canada, but depending what part your characters fly to, it could be up to 20 hours of travel from New Zealand!!! It is very far away.
Would you like to visit Canada one day? Maybe next time you could include a photo to match the story you have written.
- Miss Birtch
thank you for the amazing feedback!
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