Persuasive Writing - Takeaways

This week in writing we have been learning about how to write a persuasive argument.

I found it challenging trying to find heavily words to convince my audience.

I felt strongly about persuasive writing so choose that topic was easy.

14-3-2018

Eating Takeaways

Would you rather be healthy or lazy?

I know not eating takeaways would help your health.

First - Did you know that take aways is not healthy at all but it is divine, that is why they have them so it can be for a treat and if you were traveling.

Second - Is to only have it for a treat sometimes. You could get food poisoned. It is okay to have it once a week.

Third - If you have takeaways then that either might be that you can’t be bothered cooking or not much food left and also maybe you're being lazy. Did you also know that Mcdonalds was built in 1955. Do you know the maths of 2018 - __=1955? I know it is 63 years ago because it was in the information about it on google.

If you eat too much KFC them what do you think would happen?

I know you would have too much weight.

How many years do you think KFC has been around for?

I think 6 years because I had found some information from google.

If you eat more healthy food than unhealthy food like takeaways it will help you health level.

LIGHTHOUSE

We are learning about lighthouses and we have watched a clip animation about the lighthouse light go's out when the ship is close.

LIGHTHOUSE

“Be quiet you noisy people!” complained the lighthouse keeper. “Now where was I?

What was that?” he questioned.

“Oh better go check” he groaned as he climbed up the stairs.

“Oh ohh there is a boat and the light is not working” said the lighthouse keeper in a worried way. “Oh man what should I do?”

As the lighthouse keeper moved the lens to check the light and he tripped over the toolbox “Ahh” he cried. SMASH! went the lens on the floor.

“Oh no” he said in a sad way. “What am I going to do?”

Suddenly the lighthouse keeper heard a knock at the door, and there was the town with lanterns.

“Oh, people with lights. Quick bring the lights at the boucanee and hold the lanterns up high” he thanked the town.

“Oh the ship is closer”

“Yay we did it!”

By Kadyn

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