I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I am really proud of how you completed this writing task. I know you were not too keen on it at the start, but you ended up making a really great DLO to tell me more about yourself. You should great resilience with this blog work. It sounds like you have a lot of passions and ideas of what you want to be when you grow up! I always wanted to be a teacher :)
I look forward to working with you again on Wednesday.
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Kia ora Kadyn.
ReplyDeleteI am really proud of how you completed this writing task. I know you were not too keen on it at the start, but you ended up making a really great DLO to tell me more about yourself. You should great resilience with this blog work. It sounds like you have a lot of passions and ideas of what you want to be when you grow up! I always wanted to be a teacher :)
I look forward to working with you again on Wednesday.
- Miss Birtch