In Hurumanu 2 we are making stories about a hero and a villain and we are drawing our settings and the characters.
What I enjoyed about the writing was coming up with the ideas and drawing my pictures.
I also enjoyed how at the end of my story they go on holiday and had a nice celebration in Panama.
Here is my story...
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It is a Friday night and Joshua is finishing his last car for the day. He is preparing to go home to the secret bunker, where he lives with Olivia and will have a nice champagne.
The next morning they woke up and went to the boat to go pick up the crew for brunch and then go to work. For Joshua's brunch he had a Nacho’s with a glass of champagne, after that he went to the Workshop.
As the elevator doors opened he smelt a wift of petrol and oil and see a lot of cars that was not there from last night, then he started fixing the cars and left them outside for the owners to collect them it took him 2 hours and then he got a message from` his ear peace and said that there was a person that has escaped prison and his name is Michael and he has a weapon in his hand with blood on his shirt and the weapon, he killed 2 people on his way out of the prison fence and escaped.
Joshua rushed to the bunker to pick up Olivia and they ran to the helicopter as fast as they could. It is a bright blue helicopter that has just been upgraded from a 2 seater 1999 model to a 2019 model and it is now a 7 seater. They flew to the prison located in the desert d to take a look where Michael is. On their flight they flew fast beautiful ponds with elephants drinking out of it, they saw a lot of palm trees.
They spotted Michael and they got the rope down and climbed down, he was looking for a high sand dune to look where Michael would be. They found him about 300 metres away from the prison on a big sand dune, Joshua ran like a flash of light and had his taser out just in case he tried to run again. Joshua ran 250 metres and Michael hadn't seen him, Joshua took the shot with the taser and took the weapon that was in Michael's hands and gave it a clean in the pond and took the weapon to the police station.
Olivia got a S.W.A.T van to take him to a really secured prison that has 3x more guards and electric fence that is the same volts as a taser gun, it also has armored walls everywhere, too many cameras and 4 layers of glass. The guards cuffed Michael's arms and then his legs together, then they walked him to the highly secured room with a lot of automatic guns that pointed at people in the hall that goes to the armored room.
Joshua’s and Olivia's job is done and now they run to the helicopter and go to the bunker for a celebration party on the yacht. They had a glass of wine and some crackers & cheese and they went to a location called Panama.
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