I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia ora kadyn,
ReplyDeleteI think that honey is amazing but you could have added even more wow words, but other that that it was amazing.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
Hi there, this is Kadyn here.
DeleteI like honey too.
I like your comment i might do add more wow words.