We have been learning to use opinions for storys like:
Don't let the pigeon drive the bus
Don't let the pigeon stay up late
The pigeon wants a puppy
The pigeon needs a bath
Don’t let the pigeon stay up late.
In my opinion The tired pigeon shouldn't stay up late because…
If the pigeon stays up late the pigeon will wake up grumpy because he needs sleep.
If the pigeon stays up late he will be very grumpy and tired because he really needed sleep otherwise he is really tired to go to the funeral at 6am.
If the pigeon wakes up early he will be very tired so he can't go to his swimming class which is at 7 a.m.
There will always be a reason why the pigeon should not stay up late!
By Kadyn
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